Loved this light hearted poem of woe. The imagery and tale was full of great visuals and kept me captivated all the way through. The rhyming and rhythm a pleasure to read. Had to nominate and add to my favourites. Milly x
So do you remember anything related to this experience?
I mean people tell stories of heaven and all that, is that true?
Did you see or experience anything unusual?
I never met anyone in my life so far with such experience.
That's why asking you.
And about poem, you know you are genius, so a genius can do anything.
You can write any format of poetry at its best without a doubt.
This one, your near death experience everything perfect.
Thank you free verse (a genius, I hope I'm not that mad haha)
The fall to coming round is blank to me, still today. I will say though, as I heard faint voice of my friend, saying "Mike is dead" I can only explain this as maybe I was for a few seconds. I think now, maybe senses pick up something while.... however I just don't know and wont until the old curtain swishes haha. Lovely comments :)
Congratulations on your HM this week. All my best wishes Milly x
10 months ago
Missed call (Ben's thread) by Michael points 7
Michael weaves his tale so well with rhyme and added humour which is one thing I like about Michael's work he always has a real sense of how to attract his reader and keep them throughout the piece too. Glad you lived to tell the tale so well through your poetry and the title is fantastic and could be take two ways until reading the content itself.