Comments : My heart

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Nice poem and a perfect little slice of the power love has to build, destroy but then build again.

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by Robert Long

    all i could do is want to tear up. I don't know if you learned how to write that well or if it comes natural but all i can say is it is perfect. good job on writing this and i look forward to reading more of your poems

  • 1 year ago

    by Ya----Na

    Perfect rhyming.. MB

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A lovely tale of love, lost love and love again. Nice rhyming too. Milly x

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Mahalia

    I love this rhyming piece of first of all sadness, but then a happy ending, as you yearned for.
    A wonderful gentle poem, which get my nomination :)
    Much love
    Michael

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Such a lovely write. With the right person your heart will flourish and they guard it with their lives. Well done-

  • 1 year ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Aw beautiful! Glad it's nominated x
    =^.^=

  • 1 year ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    The right person will cherish your heart. Beautiful write. All the best

  • 11 months ago

    by Mahalia Butler

    Thank you all so much. I only post poems here cause a friend made me, but I had no idea people would actually enjoy them.