Comments : Trouble.

  • 8 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Bam

    Absolutely awesome.

  • 8 years ago

    by BeautifulSoul

    It can take a lot of strength to walk away.

    • 8 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Indeed it can BS. Thanks for your comment :-) x
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  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    KCL.. this is extremely powerful in my opinion especially as I was controlled etc etc and most certainly well rhymed = nominated for sure

    • 8 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw Em, we live and learn I guess (I hope!) :-)
      Your nomination means a lot, thanks so much lovely xx
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  • 8 years ago

    by Michael

    Miss Kitty K :)

    Wow a powerful piece, but so calmly rhymed and a lovely flow, albeit with sad theme threaded through.
    Much love
    Michael :)x

    • 8 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Lovely comments Michael, thanks so much :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 8 years ago

    by William Mae

    Good write, love doesn’t change people it molds people.

    • 8 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Indeed William, but some will always try! Thanks so much :-) x
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  • 8 years ago

    by Ren

    Amazing write! and such a powerful impact in those last few lines- whew! I'm glad to see this is nominated! Well done! :)

    • 8 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw, thanks Ren, lovely comments! :-) x
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  • 8 years ago

    by Walter

    Kitty, this is a wonderful write...potent and to the point. No need to read between the lines here! Superb.

    • 8 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Aw thanks Walter, so glad you enjoyed it :-) x
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  • 8 years ago

    by Brenda

    Miss Kitty, so true! People always think they can change another to their liking. It never works, I have been there, done that. Well done with this.

    • 8 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      It never works! Thanks so much Brenda :-) x
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  • 8 years ago

    by Ben

    KCL .......that last stanza is a killer...love the connotation in this write , your voice is very distinct and I think alot of people will be able to relate when reading this.

    Great Write :)

    Ben

    • 8 years ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      aw thanks Ben! I really appreciate that :-) x
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