Comments : Without a Why

  • 3 months ago

    by Brenda

    Meena, this is so sad and beautiful all together. So many unanswered questions, why did he leave?

  • 3 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Sad and many questions and no answer. Glad it was nominated. All the best

  • 3 months ago

    by Em

    This is so very sad but beautifully done

  • 3 months ago

    by Ren

    That ending...wow.

    A beautifully sad write.

  • 3 months ago

    by yogi73

    sigh...I read this beautiful, but sad poem as taking the high road and letting go, even though your heart has question. Taking the high road isn't always filled with immediate satisfaction, but hopefully it will be resolved.

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ms. Meena, this is beautifully written and heart-breaking at the same time. I love the tone of the poem, you can't help but be absorbed in it. With the speaker here left with many questions, a familiar feeling came back to me. Sometimes relationships end like that...so many questions left unanswered. A great write here, Ms. Meena.

  • 3 months ago

    by naaz

    If I am free to put my thoughts on this poem, then to me this poem sounds kind of sensual love.

    Like something was going to happen between two people, known or unknown, but it didn't happen and that moment lost or gone with the person who left the other.

    Between these two people one was ready to lose everything to the other one, but he just left without a why?
    Without caring about the disturbance his smile brought in the atmosphere of her heart.

    She almost saw herself uncovered in his eyes as in that moment their thoughts were twisted together.
    She was ready for their souls to get entwined too by following his scent blindly to the sanctuary of happiness and to show him that holy place which she had kept as a secret for so long. But before any of could have happened, he left without saying why?

    Forgive me, Ms Meena, If I have disturbed you with my angle of viewing this poem of yours.

    Content of the poem is really strong. I really loved the language, and the words you chose while writing this poem. Flow is smooth.
    What else I should say?
    I think it deserves to be on the front page without a why?
    All the best!

  • 3 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A beautiful piece with vivid imagery. Love lost and questions unanswered is often worse because you don't know why or what it was that went wrong which makes it more difficult to grieve. I loved the way you embodied the deep emotion with motion in such an effortless way. "Ask me to be silent and I will, but not my heart which you left in the wake of a turbulent smile" leads us straight into the storm in me" definitely one for my favourites list. Best wishes Milly x

  • 3 months ago

    by William Mae

    What a beautiful write Meena. I was always a fan of your poetry. So pure so deep are your writes. You hold a talent we all wish we had as poets. Who can read your poetry without feeling every emotion you weave into each verse. This is a master piece in poetry.

  • 3 months ago

    by Michael

    Congratulations Meena,
    I have just read your piece that I missed,
    It has so much emotion throughout. A truly wonderful write
    Much love
    Michael x :)

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Congrats on the win, Ms. Meena.

  • 3 months ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Congrats on your win

  • 3 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Congratulations on your win. Best wishes Milly x

  • 3 months ago

    by naaz

    Congratulations Ms Meena

  • 3 months ago

    by naaz

    Congratulations Ms Meena!

  • 3 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    Thank you everyone for the well wishes!

  • 3 months ago

    by Hope

    I can relate....

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Karen Montegrande

    Found that you are truly good at this.. I am a fan. :) I'm new here and i really like your poems