Comments : If Tomorrow Does Not Come

  • 6 months ago

    by Hope

    I hope you wake up tomorrow.....
    great poem, please keep writing.

  • 6 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Craig ... I don't think you're ready to shift off just yet! But I love how 'ready' you are in terms of living a life to the full, knowing how loved you've been and are and having no regrets. Can't ask for much more, can you? Fab write :-) x
    =^.^=

    • 6 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      I've led a pretty packed life thus far and I intend to carry on until I can't carry on anymore.

      Saying amongst us paddlers, I will paddle until I can't paddle anymore. When that time comes, "I hope I'm paddling"

      Craig x

  • 6 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Absolutely love this and how ready you are to go when you're time comes... There's no use dwelling on what could have, should have or would have been just live life to the fullest as you do and carry on being yourself. I loved this particular stanza "If there is a heaven!
    I'm sure mine will be river, lake or sea.
    To kayak, canoe, sail or row,
    To float eternally." as it is you down to a tee, fabulous

    All the best
    Em x

    • 6 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Thanks our Em,

      Thinking about getting a new boat by the way

      Craig x

  • 6 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    When there are writes about what ifs and what nots and why...
    here is a voice which says I've done it all and will accept gladly.
    Though there is plenty to give, I will give till the end. I like your
    spirit in this write..well penned :)

    • 6 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Not done it all yet Meena, still loads I wanna try. And I so wanna visit Japan

      Craig x

  • 6 months ago

    by Michael

    Craig,
    As always a lovely flow with rhyming and verse. Just love the last line
    Well done fella
    Michael :)

    • 6 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Cheers dude. Chuffed you liked it

      Craig

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Craig, if your tomorrow never comes I don't think you will regret a moment of this crazy life you have lived. We will miss you terribly but we will all raise a glass and toast you Craig. Well done!

    • 6 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      No intentions of popping my clogs yet my dear. I've not parachuted or bungee jumped yet lol

      Craig x

  • 6 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I wrote this short while ago following the unexpected and untimely news of am old army mates death. It caused the thought process. What if? And am I ready

    Truth is I'm not, but I've done so much to make me smile.