Comments : Deceit

  • 6 months ago

    by Hales

    Oh my goodness! I never thought that this poem would end on such a fun note!

  • 6 months ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    Well that didn’t end where I thought it would - clever x

  • 6 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    You totally nailed me with this ond.

    I was thinking of me some ill deed and then you drop the punchline in the last stanza

    Fantastic rhyming throughout and throughly enjoyable

    Craig

    • 6 months ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Haha ... so glad you liked it Craig and thanks so much for nominating it, how lovely! :-) xx
      =^.^=

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Oh Miss Kitty! You had me going there lol...well done-

    • 6 months ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Haha, love it! Thanks lovely Brenda :-) x
      =^.^=

  • 6 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Oooh I like how it goes from seeming as though someone is having an affair then bam that ending, well played :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Walter

    Ha, maybe you should have titled this poem relief which is how you made me feel when I reached the end! Great twist!

    • 6 months ago

      by Kitty Cat Lady

      Haha, where's the fun in that Walter? Lol. Thanks so much :-) x
      =^.^=