Comments : A Dance of Passion

  • 5 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a beautifully written and sensual piece this is, Kereen. I think I shall have to dance with my wife a little more often if these are the results!

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben

    • 5 years ago

      by Kereen

      Thank you. And yes you should. Smile

  • 5 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I agree with Ben this is a beautiful and sensual piece that captures the magic escapism of dance. Very well written. Milly x

    • 5 years ago

      by Kereen

      Yes thank you so very much my dear

  • 5 years ago

    by Kereen

    I had redone the poem and forgot to edit so here is the updated version of my poem