The truth is:
This poem has great flow and rhyme.

The truth is:
I'm happy to welcome you and your obvious talent to this site

You'll find us all friendly here.

Take care.

I absolutely loved this piece, it's yet another fabulous flowing, well rhymed piece which again is relatable because in times of emotion usually upset or anger we lash out at those of us we are closer to and hurt them which tends to end up in goodbyes but when we are thinking with a much clearer head we realise more often than not that we were wrong though don't often own up to it which is unfortunate.
I look forward to reading more of your works. Take care
Em x

This went straight to my favorites. There isn't one critique that comes to mind except I wanted to read more. Excellent work!

I love it.

Very good write x