Comments : #youtoo

  • 7 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Ill come back and comment..

    S this is both heart breaking yet eye opening.. to feel this way for such a long period of time.
    To have this eating at your soul.. im sorry.

    Eye opening because often we hear about how someone has been on the receiving end - not the giving end.. even if it was an honest mistake..

    Im glad your writing again. Truely. Ive missed your style and brutal honesty.. and thankyou for sharing.. it must have been difficult

    I am pleased youve gotten a little out. And hope one day you get your answers.

    Much love S

  • 7 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    I liked this a lot; not just for the good meter and rhyme, but for the willingness to share.
    I hope you do well in the contest.
    Take care.

    • 7 months ago

      by IdTakeABulletForYou

      Thank you, Mr. Darcy. It is hard to put decade-old emotions into words, especially such sensitive ones, and I'm honored that you liked it.

      Thank you kindly for reading it!


  • 7 months ago

    by Brenda

    Stephen, welcome back! Thank you for sharing this. I know this is deeply personal for you and those things that never really leave a person. Hugs to you and I hope you are well?

  • 7 months ago

    by Michael


    An open and honest piece, with a great rhyming scheme. A story that tells of your emotions, and very personal.
    Really enjoyed this
    Michael :)

  • 6 months ago

    by C Cattaway

    Beautifully relayed. A mistake, yes. A regret? No. We should only ever regret the things we haven't done, not the things we have. Every experience is an experience. Every moment is a made decision. I feel for you, living with this pain. But your story is all the better for it. May that be your silver lining.
    Much love,
    Catherine x

  • 6 months ago

    by Mark

    Congrats on the win!

  • 6 months ago

    by Paul Hirst

    Worthy of the Win

  • 6 months ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Powerful stuff as ever Stephen
    Take care x