Comments : A conversation with the moon

  • 5 years ago

    by Blank

    Beautiful.
    I love this whole discussion with the moon. As if it really talks. How powerful nature really is.
    The fact you called the moon "him" and "my dear" was sweet.
    Beautiful poem.

  • 5 years ago

    by Hellon

    This was very beautiful and..to give up the moon (that is guaranteed to be there for you) must mean that someone special has come into your life...how nice :)

    A question for you...

    It was jealous; I forgot him

    you use it and him in the same sentence when you refer to the moon...is there a reason for this??

    • 5 years ago

      by Ya----Na

      Hey, hi, Hellon. Thanks for the nomination
      Reason?
      I always think of moon as feminine. I used 'it' because I wanted to address that special one as she and 'him' because 'him' can be use for he/she as third person,plus I didn't want to repeat the word 'it' again in the same stanza.

      Or much better reason should be that my grammar is too bad, isn't it?

  • 5 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww glad this is nominated. Nice poem and I can relate because the moon is a special thing to me too.