Comments : Time never stops

  • 5 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    There have been countless times where I think time, the world, should stop or at least pause... but it's not always considerate. Sometimes it's unfathomable how the world could keep moving, people still going about their daily business, when we hurt and grieve so deeply. It seems cruel and like a punishment when we're told to keep moving like we can just forget or easily detach ourselves from loss.

    Such a powerfully emotional piece, especially when you ask time for mercy. I'm sorry for all you're going through and the pain you're facing. I hope time and memories help heal, some way, somehow.

    • 5 years ago

      by Catchy

      Thank you. I was deeply moved by your comment.

      (Though, this poem was just a draft but published it anyway. I made a few edits)