Comments : Our long-gone songs

  • 1 month ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I think there are far too many humans who just dont care about the environment. Its seems at times that there is an ongoing battle between those who want to save the world and others who dont. A dark piece with vivid imagery. Milly x

    • 1 month ago

      by - Mr. Darcy

      I just hope it's not too late for change. X

  • 1 month ago

    by Scott Cole

    Nominated

  • 1 month ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    This is really profound and powerful Mr D. Brilliant :-) x
    =^.^=

  • 1 month ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Bleak, but sadly true, Michael. This deserves the front page; it is the best poem on the nomination's list by a (polluted) country mile.

    Take care

    • 1 month ago

      by - Mr. Darcy

      I sat in our local library yesterday and wrote this. I'm not sure where it came from, but I felt the anger as I wrote.
      Thanks for your vote of confidence, but your nominated poem knocks all of us out of the park.

  • 1 month ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Mr D as always this is astounding work, I can feel your anger within this beauty and I day beauty as in it's a powerful piece which if only each one of us in the world could read it and take something from it then well the world would be a better place wouldn't it ?? This was a pleasure to read even if an 'angey' piece
    Take care x

  • 1 month ago

    by Michael

    Absolutely brilliant piece of writing and the descriptions of how our world is becoming polluted and destroyed. Such a poignant poem with great imagery to boot!
    m:)

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Wow is all I can say. So much truth and anger lies within your words. Beautiful piece. Congrats on the front page win!

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Well deserved, Michael. Take care

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Paul Hirst

    Great write Mr D very heartfelt and powerful
    Well done Sir

  • 2 weeks ago

    by Em (marmite)

    Judging comment : Our long-gone songs by - Mr. Darcy points 10 - this piece was somewhat different to the usual style I see here on p+q but one which I really admired and although it was about the Earth and what we have done to it and this authors anger towards that it fascinated me for unknown reasons. The whole of the piece was set in a way which in my opinion heightened the authors anger.