Comments : Which one

  • 19 years ago

    by lostnloveless15

    thanks i try my best on my quotes

  • 19 years ago

    by Allen

    Hey nice poem :) confusing situation and a tough choice... go with your heart... :) wish you the best :)

  • 19 years ago

    by BaybeBlew

    Awe great poem, Keep writing
    Love,

    -Blue

  • Wow! That is exactly what my state was.. Hope i have recovered. But still i feel bad for choosing one and hurting the other. But i had too. I really understand what you said. Because i went through this. ITs so difficult. Only time can make you sure what to do. Just listen to your heart! IT was a great poem. Well expressed. Keep writing.. Don't waste your talent ever.
    (i have a poem called "My dreams went on" something similar to this poem..)..Love, Trincy.

  • 19 years ago

    by lostnloveless15

    just to let you knoew your the onlt person thats said anything bad about the poem and it not even mine a freind wrote it for me

    ps the whole heywood utossmysalad thing is gay its heywood jublowme.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ten Feet Tall

    dont listen to people like that, youre poem was great. a very tough dicission to make, but good luck with everything.

  • 19 years ago

    by Lydia O

    Best of luck in your decision. Enjoyed reading your poem.

  • 19 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    This was a pretty good poem. I thought you did a pretty good job keeping your rhyme scheme intact without make unnatural rhymes and sentence constructions. However, some of your lines are much longer than others, and that sort of disrupted the rhythm of the poem. I would work on standardizing the rhythm. Good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by lostnloveless15

    not very poem rhymes most poems do but some dont .

  • 19 years ago

    by lostnloveless15

    tank u

  • 19 years ago

    by Hannah M.

    Hey Jackie, it's Hannah. I thought this poem was excellent. Hope all goes well. Keep writing and I hope to read more.

  • 19 years ago

    by lostnloveless15

    thanks

  • 19 years ago

    by beaver

    It feels as if you wrote it for me. I can really relate to this. Its excellent. :-)

  • 19 years ago

    by lostnloveless15

    thanxs i do my best

  • 19 years ago

    by Kelsey

    WOAH!! GREAT POEM!! IT BLEW ME AWAY!! AND THAT HEYWOOD OR W/E DUDE CAN SUCK IT UP THAT YOU GOOD AND HE SUCKS!!!...woah sry my temper get over reached alot! great job writing buhbyez-Kels

  • 19 years ago

    by Rebekah

    wow!that was beautiful...very beautiful!

  • 19 years ago

    by Kayla Sonya Dearing

    Great poem. Keep up the good work. I know how you feel though I've been there too many times.

  • 19 years ago

    by _the_punk_kid_

    an amazing piece! i hope it all worked out well for you, keep up the good work! :)beanxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Lexi Lou

    awesome poem! i loved it! keep in touch!
    lexi lou

  • 19 years ago

    by lostnloveless15

    thanx