Comments : Memories

  • 13 years ago

    by David Munoz

    Yes I know I have been pretty silent in the poetry department, but I hope everyone will at least give this poem a chance. Thanks in Advance to everyone who votes/comments.

  • 13 years ago

    by Ashley Morris

    Good job, David. I love reading your poetry. You are a good poet, keep up the good work. And I am sorry about the girl...She doesn't know what she's gonna miss out on. You are a great guy.

    Your friend,
    Ashley

  • 13 years ago

    by Psychopathic

    thats so sad it makes me think of what happened to me i said i would say i do someday then he went away but he came back and im keeping him

  • 13 years ago

    by Amy

    Wonderful poem!!! I feel that EXACT way! Wonderful job!!

    Amy

  • 13 years ago

    by Hope

    I love the repetition of "the memory" and the consistent rhyme scheme. Those 2 techniques together make it easy to read and adds impact to your message. Great job :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Daniel Ward

    wow, that is exactly how i feel about someone that means everything to me. i'm going to send her this, giving you credit of course. keep writing, and check out my poems and comment please.

  • 12 years ago

    by writer girl

    wow...i can relate to that so well that its not even funny. great job, loved it alot. 5/5

    -kk-

  • 12 years ago

    by lauren.

    what a great poem. I can relate oh too well. =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    Thats an awful experience....I hope that you're okay! I know that loving someone even after they've left is an incredible pain! I do hope that you are okay David! I can't imagine being in you place, not again...5/5 though on an incredible poem...

  • 11 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Ppwerful write ... completely heartfelt. I've marked you so that I can go back and read more of your works.

  • 11 years ago

    by Lost Soul 691

    Powerful, not ppwerful ... can't spell tonight!

  • 10 years ago

    by Sasha

    Wow that was a great poem