wow amazing poem, this is how i feel with my friends, i dont know what i would do with out them, i probably wouldnt be here if it wasent for them. Ur friend is lucky to have someone like you, again amazing poem i love it so much! :)
Hey this poem kind of remindes me of myself i tryed to kill myself and my friend was there for me she is the best i love all my friends and i loved ur poem is amazing
12 years ago
wow! excellent poem!! it's really very good...i know what it's like too to deal with all those things....i've been thru them all...so ur not the only one! great poem though..keep it up~
Well written! I know exactaly how you felt before you helped save your friend, unfortunately though, my friend is having troubles getting over the hump of stoping her negative thoughs. Slowly though, she will change. I love her to pieces, and if she wasn't here, I don't know how I could go on.
Hopefully people who read this poem understand the amount of pain they put their friends and family through while wanting to end their own li ve s, and decide that simple change is better than no life at all.
Wow this brought a tear to my eye...it's really starting to make me think about my life...I'm this type of person besides the fact that I don't try to commit suicide and I don't cut either but I'm always trying to push my friends away when they want to help me because I'm the type of person who has a low selfisteam...I mean I'm not fat but I call myself fat and I'm not ugly but I call myself ugly and my friends are always trying to tell me it's not true but I just deny it and push them away....GOOD JOB KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!! I GIVE IT A *5*!!!
this poem is so good! it had me in tears because i can relate to it so much! its like you wrote exactly how i feel!!!! i know what its like to worry wether or not one of your closest friends will be alive tomorrow! your a great writer..keep it up !
that is a really good poem and sometimes ppl try to help their friends from committing suicide but i have couple questions for you "do you know what it is like to walk into your friends house and find him not there and walk into the backyard and find him on the ground covered in blood and w/ a knife in his heart?" "do you know what it is like to run over to them and they die in your arms and the parents arent home" do you know what it is like to go to his funeral and stare at a boy you should have lived to be 80 instead of 12 " and one more do you know what it is like to lose your best friend in the world to suicide because they thought that know one cared anymore and all the love that everyone felt for him he thought didnt exsist you probaly dont and when you do lok me up and we can talk