What do you see?

by Alison   Mar 22, 2005


Look into my eyes...
tell me what you see
tell me what goes through your mind when you gaze at me
Can you see the girl that longs to belong so bad?
And can you see the girl that bleeds when shes sad?
Do you look far down enough to see my Brightside?
Past the doubts, dirty looks and shouts, to the corner where it subsides....

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  • 21 years ago

    by Pianist

    Flows well, and it seems to be good... but you didn't finish. Why not? You were doing so well. Maybe you were just trying to leave the reader wondering aye? Anyway, read some of my stuff if you ever get the chance.

  • 21 years ago

    by vanna

    i really like that! i got a thing for eyes. that puts an image in my head

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