Suicide consequences

by Elynnka   Apr 22, 2005


Demons with their filthy cries
Full of hate and filled with despise
Prepare the start of your demise
Provoked by your own horrid lies…

How many times did you look inside?
Searching for all those thoughts you hide,
Memories of all the nights in which you cried
For you had the chance to stop, but never tried…

Do you feel sorry now for every bleeding time?
For every cut upon your skin was a fatal crime
And so was every time you lied when said “I’m fine”,
But this is what you chose…a rotten grave in slime…

The consequences of a suicidal thought,
Which you had but of which you forgot,
Are the result of your own mind’s plot,
You could have stopped this, but you never fought…

Some say all who commit suicide are sent to Hell,
For they had so many chances their grief to tell,
But instead to the devil’s temptations fell,
So now they’re gone with no “Farewell”…

**I hope nobody will get angry with me because of this poem...some may not agree...all I'm saying is that there's always a way out of problems...and suicide is not the right way...I am a religious person and so I believe that the ones who commit suicide will be sent to Hell...is that what you want? to suffer even in the "after-life"?...stay strong and don't fall to the temptation of commiting suicide**

~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    I agree with this....i used to ATTEMP suicide but not anymore.....i'm out of it! great poem!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by broken angel

    Nice job. I don't know if I entirely agree with your last statements, but I definitely have to congratulate you on writing an excellent poem. Thanks for the comment on mine!
    Luv always, KT

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Ley*~

    suicide is not a choice it happens merely when pain exceeds means and resources for coping with pain. this was a great poem 5/5 i really liked it. :D keep up the good work.
    ~Freak~

  • 18 years ago

    by Nikki

    hey i really liked this one, its one of my favorites that you wrote.

  • 19 years ago

    by foreverISgone

    good job im a christian sometimes its hard to find jesus in all the crap the media throws our way but we have to make it work
    good job