WOW... That was powerful Car... I loved it!! That was so awesome! I loved it! Keep writing... And stay strong....
With much love and a hug,
Krista J.

wow car..great poem! i love it! keep it up! 5/5!

*jenny*

OMG....I think that is one of my favorites!!! That was sooo good Carlee, I wouldn't change anything about it...
Katie

beautiful, simply beautiful! you truely have talent. thank you for your comments. hope your ok? Much Love. awsome poem. keeep up the awsome work

Nick

Another beautiful poem, you are truly talented. Enjoyed. hugs, love, *Ann*

Thanks, everyone!
Car

'And I cried like I hadn't in years'
This is my favourite line in the poem but the whole thing was really great!

Mmm That was beautiful. I felt every word you said, a perfect balance of emotional weakness and strength. Thank God for rain and thank God for Himself! He is awesome