Comments : The walls of depression

  • 11 years ago

    by FallenAngel

    Hey gr8 poem.. loved the use of words.. you are realy talented ya, keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Rebecca Phillips

    I think this is an unbelievable poem.went straight to my heart.really hit the spot.keep thje poems coming.I love readingmthem.love beccy.

  • 11 years ago

    by carla

    Amazing! i feel like that sometimes, and i just can't help it. Luv your poem =)

  • 11 years ago

    by UnwrittenTragedy

    Amazing poem, and good form. I really love and understand this. keep up the good work.
    Izzy

  • 11 years ago

    by jojo88

    Hay nice poem it has good meaning it say just the way i feel at the montert well grat poem

    u got my vote

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by TotaMariee

    Amazing,it flowed really well,i can really really relate 5/5 love it!! :D

  • 10 years ago

    by Candy

    I like your poem has a lot of feeling to it. Good job!

  • 10 years ago

    by TJ

    I understand the words. Great job capturing what happens when you start to go on the down slide. Keep it up.

  • 10 years ago

    by Emiillyy

    I think this poem is really good 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Angelic Scars

    Deeply beautiful in every way...another poem that takes my breath away

    <333

  • 10 years ago

    by Unknown Soul

    This is a veryyyyy good poem...well done..5/5 from me...

  • 10 years ago

    by sirusthevirus

    U write it in a way i can never write.

  • 10 years ago

    by chind

    Oh wow !
    thats a great poem.
    so sad and so much emotion.
    i really loved it (Y)

    louii

  • 10 years ago

    by Alicia

    Your a great poet don't let anyone say else Where do you get you ideas and put them toether i would thank you if you could give me some tips where im going wroung in some of my poems thanks a bunch
    Alicia

  • 10 years ago

    by sirusthevirus

    Sound like the way im going sealing myself off from everyone else. just to get away just to just to protect myself from getting hurt..

    great poem u wrote i read it to many times...

  • 10 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    Wow, you've blown my brain out thats exactly how I feel sometimes

  • 10 years ago

    by XxFadinG AwaYxX

    I really like this poem!!

  • 10 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Hey, thats was just great. like serious, its beautifully written. one of the best i ve read!! and the rimes at 2nd n 4 th, thats awsome. great idea! iono how u got it, Im realli curious in how you came up with it. =P totally deserves a 5/5!! ^^

  • 10 years ago

    by David Rances

    ...dats super deep. i like the styles and techniques u use. really descriptive, awesome. just pure awesome.

  • 10 years ago

    by Forever Depressed

    This is amazing, I love it. It's deep and I can relate to it.