Hey gr8 poem.. loved the use of words.. you are realy talented ya, keep it up

I think this is an unbelievable poem.went straight to my heart.really hit the spot.keep thje poems coming.I love readingmthem.love beccy.

Amazing! i feel like that sometimes, and i just can't help it. Luv your poem =)

Amazing poem, and good form. I really love and understand this. keep up the good work.
Izzy

Hay nice poem it has good meaning it say just the way i feel at the montert well grat poem

u got my vote

5/5

Amazing,it flowed really well,i can really really relate 5/5 love it!! :D

I like your poem has a lot of feeling to it. Good job!

I understand the words. Great job capturing what happens when you start to go on the down slide. Keep it up.

I think this poem is really good 5/5

Deeply beautiful in every way...another poem that takes my breath away

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This is a veryyyyy good poem...well done..5/5 from me...

U write it in a way i can never write.

Oh wow !
thats a great poem.
so sad and so much emotion.
i really loved it (Y)

louii

Your a great poet don't let anyone say else Where do you get you ideas and put them toether i would thank you if you could give me some tips where im going wroung in some of my poems thanks a bunch
Alicia

Sound like the way im going sealing myself off from everyone else. just to get away just to just to protect myself from getting hurt..

great poem u wrote i read it to many times...

Wow, you've blown my brain out thats exactly how I feel sometimes

I really like this poem!!

Hey, thats was just great. like serious, its beautifully written. one of the best i ve read!! and the rimes at 2nd n 4 th, thats awsome. great idea! iono how u got it, Im realli curious in how you came up with it. =P totally deserves a 5/5!! ^^

...dats super deep. i like the styles and techniques u use. really descriptive, awesome. just pure awesome.

This is amazing, I love it. It's deep and I can relate to it.