Comments : The walls of depression

  • 11 years ago

    by Helensworld

    Your poem is fantastic. You are letting readers understand the feeling. I had once felt that way but the feeling is gone. keep up your good work =]

  • 11 years ago

    by pookiengurgi

    Excellent work..so sad but you've got a real point..keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by cuddelyxbutxviciousXxX

    Nice, ive felt that way a lot of the time ive been alive, but just knowing that im not alone, makes me feel good.:]
    ~kim

  • 11 years ago

    by BIGDreamsReba

    Your poem was amazing, and I loved it.

  • 11 years ago

    by chini

    It's nice!;)

  • I give this poem 5/5
    REVS

  • 11 years ago

    by trist3sa

    Nice*

  • 11 years ago

    by kayla

    I lyk this it's realy good

  • 11 years ago

    by A Broken Bleeding Soul

    Loved it. The story behind it is very hearbreaking. Overall, the flow was good... as was the rhyming. My favorite part was:

    They lock all our emotions
    Then throw away the key
    The world outside aches for us
    But the bars don’t let us see

    It just has this perfect flow that I can't really explain. 5/5

    ~ Tina

  • 11 years ago

    by Melissa

    Oh wow...I love it.
    I was in a relationship like this once....and got out of it with exactly how that person was with me.
    I was able to find hope though and I've been able to set myself free from that. =)

    +5

  • 11 years ago

    by Crystal

    I Really Liked This Poem.. Your Description Is Amazing :) x

  • 11 years ago

    by Sirrah

    Amazing...flows great, amazing wording...5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Shannon

    Amazing poem. Describes inner torment well. Good writing!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    I just want to tell u that you are my most favourite writer bcos of this poem. I read this poem a long time ago, and i never 4got it...this was b4 i joined poems & quotes myself. i suffer from depression regulary... and its true... it destroys you.. the REAL YOU.the verse b4 the last one says it all 4 me.5/5!

  • 7 years ago

    by mikaylar

    Wow! ur amazing! wish i could write that good.
    :)

  • 7 years ago

    by John Dlyan Boone BABY

    Good

  • 7 years ago

    by John Dlyan Boone BABY

    I love this so much good job keep it up so beautiful

  • 6 years ago

    by KRYSTAL B

    Very good, thank you

  • 6 years ago

    by Susan

    I enjoyed this very much ... And how I can relate! Great write!

  • 6 years ago

    by Amber

    Love it