Comments : What May Happen

  • 12 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very well put! What a great message! Life is definitely to short! Nice short poem! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Very nice message sent. Powerful and simple poem. Take care xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    i really like this poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ashli

    nice job! great message, the rhyming seemed a little jumpy tho...otherwise good job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah Drew

    This poem has a really good message that there's no point in fighting and being mad because life is to short to be hating every person you meet.

  • 12 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Again, wunderful message...luvd the poem.....keep up the gr8 work...ur gunna need 2 lemme kno wen u make new poems!
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