it is soooo true cause the exact samething happened to me!!!

I definately can relate to it. Really good! 5/5

awesome poem...it flowed nicely. I especially like the last two lines, kind of an oxymoron, I love those. Great job!

Take Care,
Renee

good poem. ive had sum friends like this. they were my best friends n then got into a stupid fight n stopped bn friends. well at least that happened to me. but i thought it was a great poem

very well written! flowed incredibly well and nothing wrong about it! and i know how it feels, believe me! great job definately a 5/5!!

WOW! amazing poem, sorry you lost your friend. True friends stand the test of time lol 5/5

love mark xxx

thnx 4 ur comment :)

Nicely done lisa. its got a emmense feel to it but yet tragic and sad.
keep it up!

Very good, but I'd like to point out without reading everyone elses comments that in the line 'Brought it all to a end,' the proper word would be 'an' not 'a'. Other than that, it was great.

Omg omg omg i love this poem a lot. It's amazing and I feel this way so much. I just finished writing abotu a boken friendship, its my newest poem if you wanna check it out. buut great job!

I can relate to the poem..my best friend changed compltelely into what she hated, and just left her friends...we got inot a huge fight over it.....well you know the rest... anywyas.. i love the poem, had meaning, and i liked the way you wrote it

Great poem i can really relate to it i lost my best friend over a guy so yeah i know what you are going through. very well written and short but gets right to the point. i really enjoyed it keep wrighting you have great talent.

Aw..thats so sad....i hate it when that happens to friends...5/5

Very nice poem.

I loved that poem! It was very short but the best short poem I have ever read! 5/5 all the way. And yeah, it has happened to alot of us.

Very very well written, so strong yet short. I really liked it. well done! xxx

Nice poem gave u a 5 evern tho should be a 6 love the way your lines run and the feelings of truth

It`s a lovely poem and I can relate to it in some way. I think a lot of people would agree with what your saying and I think it`s a great poem!

God, I really like this poem. I lost my best friend a month ago. Still hurts.
JJx

Very good poem.

Omg dis has happened to me b4 n i so know what yr going through n i hope u bet akk mwa luv ya
n luv da poem...xoxox i gave it a 5/5