I really like this one too. again, there was a couple places where it didn't quite flow right. but it's such a sweet poem. again. great job
crystal

Hey, nice poem, well written.
It's sooooooooo sweet, i really liked it.

xxx cici xxx

I can really tell that this poem was written with emotion, and u can't alter a poem like that! but this was very interesting! i gave u a 5/5

Very well done great poem however i think you should have gone in to a little more detail twords the end and could have been a few lines longer
great emotion excelent verse

Intense love poem I like your style