The butterfly dance!!

by ||The...Nameless||   Aug 28, 2005


I watched you as you flew through the sky
I watched you with my interested eyes

You gave the emotion of happy to me
Because the way you were so free

The way your wings flapped through the air
made me think,
and made me care

You are one of the truly beautiful things on this earth
just like life,
just like birth

I love you with my warm embrace
You bring a smile to my face

My eyes follow you as you dance
You are the real life butterfly of romance

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  • 18 years ago

    by LoStxInxVoIcEs

    I love it very good poem keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Fig

    Ooh i thought i already read this poem. anyhoo....good job... again, beautifully written,
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by disenchanted

    It makes me feel sort of free and light. Peaceful. It very well written. It flows well and its beautiful. Well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*~MoNiQuE~*~

    Its flowing and sweet...makes you feel like your floating! it really does...different techniques as well but really good!

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    Very nicely written. I loved it. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

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