What you wrote is so true, you can see so much when you really take the time to look into ones eyes. You ended this poem perfectly with total truth. I hope things are going well with you, I wish you and your guy the best of luck. Sorry, I haven't had much time on the site lately, I am trying my best to keep up on my reading, and I really wish I had the time to write. Take Care! Brooke~

I love this poem.Its the truth.My ex boyfriend eyes sparkel when i am around him.His eyes tell me everything.

Nice poem girl. Keep it up.

Ive read all you poems....there really good i envy your tallent alot.
thank you for commenting. i hope so too. and thanx for the luck.
peace hun
and keep in touch i hope you dont mind i put u in my favorites.
-x0-
chyenne

Hey Brit! Long time no see. Anyways. Good job!

My eyes always give me away, can never hide anything..... You did a wonderful job on this write, keep up the awesome work.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Awwww, that's so cute... you can really tell that you TRULY love this guy

Dang dat was a really good poem..i liked it..hey thnx 4 commenting my poem..oh yea n i rate this a 5 soo yea...well keep up da good work k?..bye!!!
~ShOrTy~

Its nice to see happy poems, not as entertaining but hey none the less nice to see...i like this poem however lol I just took a class on creativity today and this is kinda boring to tell you the truth its ordinary its all been said before.......i cant say im all that exciting.....but i think the idea is worn out and you should spice it up instead of stating it out plain so im going to give this a 3/5 because with such a basic idea more powerful words and better metaphors and what not are needed and it simply wasn't exellent or good it was fair though....

keep it up i think you can do better

Cute

I put you in my favorites. Now I got you, lol. :)