Encaged Love

by daniel (AKA The Freak)   Sep 20, 2005


(Dedicated poem to the girl that still has something that belongs to me,My heart)
By:Daniel A.K.A. Th3 Fr3ak

My words aren't empty,
What I say is true.
When I tell you about my thoughts,
And feelings for you.
Stay with me forever
Because I know this is real
I know for sure I love you
I'm positive this is how I feel
Let me kiss you one more time,
Let me hold you close to my heart,
Let me never wake up from this dream,
Let us never part.
Remember when we first met
And the sacrifices that had to be made
And all the good times we had,
Our love never seemed to fade.
Even despite the fights and feuds.
And disregarding all the anger and rage.
We still ended up staying in love.
Our hearts locked together in a cage.
Though we left with blood on our hands
Hearts were ripped and torn
You still amazingly got me back
And now I love you more then KoRn
I don't know what it is,
Or how you bewitch me.
But I know that it better last,
Because I love you Vee.

P.S. U hobos better start rating and comment. I'm tired of working my mind off with my rhymes and emotions and getting some lame 2 comments though i do appreciate them, i should have more if my poetry really IS as good as everyone leads me to believe

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  • 20 years ago

    by Renee

    Do you know how incredibly hard it is to find your poems? pretty damn hard.

    This is really sweet Dan. Who is this Vee girl? I haven't heard of her yet, but it sounds like she means a lot to you, so she must be amazing.

    I think you should go to the Discussion part, it's like a whole nother world on this site, and I used to go there all the time. I think it's pretty fun at 2 in the morning when you can't sleep.

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