Great poem keep it up and i wish all guys were like you

Again, not bad.

I like how you compared your addiction of your girlfriend to the addition of drugs. =)

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

This is a nice one !!
not much rhyming...but its nice & umm... i wish she read it !! im happy for amanda
5/5 of course !!

Yes, love is like that. I loved the poem, with its air of despair and its melody was quite nice too. Amanda is a very lucky person!

Good Writing!
beth

I liked this poem alot, it was like a loveey dovey poem but then there was like an edgy factor i dont know...but it is also kind of a split poem i cant tell wether the message is "i love you" or something like "i love you and its making be depressed and obsessive" but your a great writer and you are very good at expressing yourself even if you are kinda confusing, great job

Your description of longing is set powerfully with the metaphors you use. I continue to be impressed.

LOVED IT!!
well written!

Jacs
xxx

Aw thats so cute, again i can relate....wow u have a wonderful gift....i hope u use it throughout ur lifetime!
~*Who Cares?*~

Sweet hun. :)

Great poem if only all guys thought like you comment on mine please thanx