How cute...made me smile...sweet...and you can actually sing it...

I really felt the spirit that your poem was set out to do...
it captivated me in way i never thought possible...
keep on writting poems you have such a great talent....

Hah. This poem is like a Picaso painting of the poetry world. Underapreciated because of it's off beat view point, but bound to be legendary.

I really like the format and I envy how it flows despite the unique format... 5/5

I love how its short yet powerful! 5.5 love shisana