Aw how sad. a tearjerker! a geek is a geek never a geek for long. ;D 5/5

Awwwww that was a really good poem, i know what its like to have to hide bruises it sucks, i love you writing keep it up. Check some of mine out. Nat

How sad... this is truly touching I am so glad that I stumbled upon it. Very nice indeed.

--Sher

That was AWESOME!

I loved this poem! The feel, tecture, and rhythm of the verses made it quite the enjoyable read. I'd love to see more of your work, keep them coming. =)

Wow thats haert breaking...and whats so haert breaking about it is you see this stuff everyday! instead of reaching out to the kids who need it most people stereo type them and laugh at them..i love the way you captured the feelings...nice job 5/5

This poem is just awsome!! This type of thing happen to kids everyday. Great job!! 5/5

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I think that this would have to be the best poem that i have read in all my life i really like it

I think that this would have to be the best poem that i have read in all my life i really like it

As always this is an Outstaning Poem...
I love your work!!!

Keep It Up!!!

~sara~

Girl I think you have found your calling!!!! ...and it is to be a poet. You are the BOMB!!! I can not wait to read your next one.Keep up the great work!!
Tisha~

Touching write, surely can bring tears to the eye....great job...

Love Ann

I love that poem it is so sad but you can write poetry very good that is why i put you on my favorites check me out sometime

Woah this is insanely good. not that your insane.. ahh you know what i mean, i hope? its like one of my poems except mine was about a little girl and her mommy. yes but i loved it and i will vote it and get my friends to too! my poem is Loving Molly if you would like to see what i mean about them being similiar. xox
MissInvisible

Excellent poem. sad but practical. Amazing work, I give you 5/5. Thank you so much for your sweet comments on mine.

You have a great way of writting... it really shows seeing as how you have about 50 coments... you have a great style.. keep writting. you're great at it!
ALLiSON

How Lovely...
I'm sorry thats all I can say everyone else has said what I wanted to say :P

Omg i love this poem!! It's so sad expesically when you know its happening to millions of little boys and girls everyday..............again awaome poem!

Aww hun this poem was just soo beautiful....you are a brilliant person who knows how to use your words to engage a person and tell their story. It was really great and i loved it!!! Keep it up!!! So many people love your work so never stop!!!
luv jess xoxo