I loved that poem, 5/5!! Thank you so much for your comment on my work. This poem is great i loved it!! :-) xxx

WOW!! I am speechless.... I think i have a tea in my eye!! :) EXCELLENT! 5/5!!

That was so sad. I'm actually about to cry. You wrote of something that actually happens in real life, though. This is beautiful. It has a very nice rhythm and flow to it. You're really talented. I get more impressed with your poems every time I read them.

Awww :'( poor guy

Wow thats excellent....its so sad tho :[
u have wonderful talent! keep writing!!!

OMG!! *TEAR, TEAR!* I was reading this out loud to myself, and I almost didn't make it. LOVE IT!!

Love, Poetvoices

Wow gr8 poem keep it up well done

Wow allz i cud say iz ur a very talented writer all tha poemz i read so far r excellent includin thiz 1 well keep up tha gud work ur doin gr8 once again!!!!5/5

Omg that was so sad but so amazing!! once again!!!and if any chance you are this person or gets hit by your dad and thats what inspired you 2 write this poem i want you 2 no im always here okay!!!take care and keep shining LoVe jOsIe oxoxox

This is the best poem I have read in a long time. I hardly know what to say...

That's school for you. I hate it when i see people calling these kids geeks....There's so much hate in the world...i really like this poem, and i agree with everything in it...

Speachless.

5/5

Oh my gosh! This is so good babe! It has so much emotion! It almost made me cry! I love it! keep it up! much love~Kim

Oh my gosh babe! this is awesome! it has so much emotion in it! I love it! keep it up! much love~Kim

This one made me cry. you have a beautiful talent for portraying sorrow. i hope some dad out there who abuses his child reads this and comes to his senses.

hope you always find peace with your writing.

Aww :/ This is soo sad poor little thing somehow i dont quite no what to think i mean are all your poems based on true stories in your life as you have alot of poems about this crash and quite a few about a little boy and 1 about a girl sorry if its a blonde thing to ask. These are soo sad and im sorry if they are :/ xxx

This is the first time I read a poem that almost left me in tears.

I was a bit upset that the poem ended so soon, but then again, it would loses it's meaning if it continues on.

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

Omg so sad cuz its soo true cuz theres kids out there in our schools today who are in the same problems..
i love your work its great...

Man you r great

Wow that is really really good