Oh my...very beautiful, I think. There wasn't a rhyme scheme, but I could kinda detect a sort of rhythm...I love the theme, considering I am an ex-cutter. I've been abused and I am literally damaged, bent so far back that I'm broken. I'm glad you like my poetry, beyond belief I really am. So thank you so much!!

i support you and your poetry too. NICE subject, nicely written because I can't write anything that doesn't rhyme, lol! I wish I could, but i just can't stop the whole stanza pattern. Every thought of mine is organized into a stanza, quite annoying sometimes, but helps me write I guess.
Poetry, for me, takes a lot of consideration and editing....revising especially. And I think that if you really wanted, you could write AMAZING poetry. You have potential!! But for the moment, this is still very touching and inspiring!
thanks for sharing!

~Sierra

Awsome! ur good

Very powerful and awesome poem, keep it up

Hiya,, i can exactly understand the message ur trying to say in ur poem,, but try to use words more in a fluent way,, try to put it better toghter,,but other wise i loved ur poems,, nicely done..
**doz an1c me**

Great poem. even though there was no rhyming scheme it was great!
hu says poems have to rhyme anyway??? lol
keep up the greatness lol
love jess XXX

Great poem, truley awesome ur a great poet i wish i could write half as good as u one day that was amazing, peace

@MY

Hum hum... I've got to say something. First of all thank you for understanding my poetry.. And with this poem you wrote I understand why you do.
You've got my full support on both poetry front and personal front.. It's beautiful!

love,
~* TasH *~

Thats amazing, its so strong I wish i could be half the writer u r

An amazing poem rachy dahling! You know I love your work babe!
Kelly xxxxxxx

I understand exactly what your saying..good job..keep it up thanks for the comment on mine!!! xox nelle

Great poem and well organized!

Very powerfully written peice, very well described and expressed

5/5