Comments : Hidden Eyes

  • 18 years ago

    by J Lau

    Great write. Love how it started off as an emotional sad poem and ended with hope and inspiration. Keep writing... 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Excellent poem - it flows really well I hope everything is ok xXx

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by firexflys

    Great poem huh it was amazing. keep up the great work and thakns for that sweet comment. it meant a lot to me 5.5

  • Wow, another great one I see. well read lol. this sounds liek the story (or life which ever u prefer) of a muslim girl hidden behind her head cloth, I love it . and if theres also another meaning that I can see but i still love it.

  • 17 years ago

    by *~vixen~*

    Wow, this one was deep.
    5/5 great poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by sarah

    What can I say.. amazing job, very well writin keep them coming take care hun sarah x

  • 17 years ago

    by Connie

    I just think this is a great poem - so very well written, and easy flowing! Great job!

    Connie

  • 17 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Ur poems r beautiful...ur an awesome poet, u can take my word 4 that...this is beautiful...=)

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    WOW! incredible
    Beautiful poem. Awesome.
    love the meter and the rhyme scheme
    5/5
    ♥
    ~Stephen White

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    ''These eyes are screaming for help,
    upon the world's deaf ears,
    by sitting and doing nothing,
    we might as well be creating their tears.''

    I loved this, I think it has to be the best written stanza of your's I have read so far!
    This poem was just beautiful, you really have great talent.

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    AHH im so jelous okaY!!.. you have such a way with words.. your poems just breathe poetry.. especially this one.. i love when you say "upon the words deaf ears" i mean its just so creative.. the flow and rhyme also in this poem are beyond perfect.. thanks for sharing

  • 17 years ago

    by amoxi

    This poem was amazing its so sad how women in other countries have to live the hardships for men are selfish indiginus pigs i loved it 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Deana

    You are really good ,I can really feel this poem, things are not always what they seem. great write.

  • 17 years ago

    by in.need.of.a.lucky.charm

    This poem made me angry, i felt so sorry for the women in the poem. it was really well writen.

    much love and many kisses,
    bex

  • 16 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    This the best of what I have read so far. You really kept the reader interested in this mystery.
    I really like it.

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Wow.. another Great one.. You truly are talented wish i could write as good as you.
    This flowed and rhymed really well.
    5/5 Keep up the great work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    A great write, and a magnificent read, i was d\so enveloped in the meaning, great job, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Anonymous Angel

    Hey,
    wow an awesome poem, the flow is great as well as the rhyming, you have a great talent =)

    my favorite stanza:
    ''These eyes are screaming for help,
    upon the world's deaf ears,
    by sitting and doing nothing,
    we might as well be creating their tears.''

    good work
    kisses stephanie

  • This is nice. the flow and structure is good. i just love thed concept of this poem great work. 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    This was done a long time ago but great work now catch my eyes.