Im not gonna vote right now, if you fix the grammar and stuff it'll be even better... and if you do just a little more than that and bump up your vocab some... you'll be awesome, it'll be awesome
keep up the great work tho
amanda

I like this poem. its not alot of rhyming but i can really feel how ur feeling

Hey, this poem was really good! there was a lot of emotion, and u have expressed ur feelings very well. great work, 5/5, and thanku for the comment :)
take care hun xxxxxxxxxxxxx