Remember to breath...

by ..::Angel of your darkness::..   Apr 1, 2006


I miss you
And I'm sorry
For whats going on
Never thought things
Would go so badly wrong

Can't quite accept it
The fact were not together
Because when you held me
And said "I love you"
I thought you meant forvever

Apologizies wont do now
Not now we've fell apart
I pretended it didn't hurt at first
But now it's tearing at my heart

Nothings quite the same
Now that your not here
I cant quite get through the days
Without shedding a few tears

Not sure if I can go back
The way I once came
Because if we tried to make it work
Would things never be the same?

Would we argue a little more?
Care a little less?
With the scars on my body
I'd never be able to undress

I'm now too ashamed
Of the things I've done
Far too hurt you didn't notice
All that was going on

Tried to make it through
Tried to get to you
And now that it's all over
I just don't know what to do

Too far to hear my words
Too far for us to see
Who would of thought?
We where never meant to be

I'm so sorry i had to do this
I never wanted to say goodbye
I promise you I still care
and feel for you inside

You know I love you so much
But you're too far for me to see
I know I can get through this though
If I just remember to breathe...

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very powerfully expressive piece of writting. only fault ii found was that the word "your" in line 2 of the 4th stanza should be "you're". other than that there are no faults that i could see. the structure and flow are great and the content amazingly powerfully protryed.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sophi[e]

    That is truely amazing. Incredibly touching... a true inspiration. Although if these are your feelings, i'm sure you'd rather have them taken away than write a great poem? -take care-

  • 18 years ago

    by MadelineJayde

    A great, deep and meaningful p0em. i l0ve it! that is exactly the way i feel with my ex, i can relate t0 this p0em s0 much! 5/5! keep up the go0d w0rk
    l0ve maddy x0ox

  • 18 years ago

    by shahadah

    That was so cute, it remind me of my ex boyfriend!!!!! so deep and emotional

  • 18 years ago

    by Azure :)

    I love your poem, its writen really well and lovely choice of words, god bless you * xxxxx

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