Woah..that was good. it made u think, and had a lotta emmotion! gr8 poem! 5/5
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I liked it alot,caught my attention,good work,keep writing,comment on mine,i have some kinda simlier,thanks

"picking all my flowers,
and leaving me with your graves."

I love that part...it's awesome! Don't get me wrong the entire poem rocks, but those lines....just wow!
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Wow that is really good. It was filled with emotions & its a very powerful poem. It flowed well & the rhythm really helped to bring out all of the emotions. Great job on this.

Wow.. another great poem.. the flow is wonderful as well as the rhymes.. however a few did seem forced but it happens to all of us.. great job still.. and nice choice of words.. keep up the amazing work!!

I really love this poem.. but in the 5th stanza you say the guy chooses his words carefully and then in the 6th you say the words he carefully elected.. its like saying the same thing twice .. maybe a forced rhyme.. but other than that the flow is flawless and the poem is filled with emotion

I can relate to your words in this one, it's a piece filled with emotions and with superb imagery.
The first stanza is my favorite.
Keep up, 5/5