Save Me!!

by Lollypop   May 2, 2006


Save me from the poison
Of my tears.
I cry regretfully.
It strengthens my fears.
Rescue me from myself.
I wish to do me harm.
The pain will only end
When I'm dead.
I take my knife.
I raise it high above me.
My hand is shaking, trembling.
It falls to the ground.
I fall to my knees.
Deliver me from my own hand.
I could hurt myself.
I am crying, tears of blood,
Running down my face.
If you don't stop the bleeding,
Patch me up inside,
I will die.
Save me from myself.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Darkening Dawn

    Wow..i feel it

  • 17 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very powerful and expressive, the flow was disrupted in placeas but quickly recovers. fantastic content.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Extinct Angel

    Hey nice write check out some of my poems please and i'll keep looking at yours i'll comment on ones that draw my attention well, instead of just saying crying tears of blood the flow would have been better with
    tears of blood
    stream down my face
    from eyes holding
    back the pain
    well anyways good write keep on letting the poems flow

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