"Tell me this isn't how it has to be
But there is nothing more you see
And as I look at you, you turn away
When I asked you please baby stay"

Great stanza!! I loved it!! You have a special way with words!!! I couldnt find anything wrong!!! Keep it u 5/5!!

Hey dear I love it! See ya later

Hey darl beautifully written a heartfelt piece. keep em c0ming! =]

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

This was cute, i really liked it!

Another nice poem... I love the way you write!