Good poem .. 5/5

I like the poem view mying and please comment on mine.

Wow i rote a poem on this topic and it wernt half as good as yours you are a great writer and that is the honest truth you are deep and i absolutley love that well done keep up the good work will you look at my poems plz thnx xxx alex xxx

Wonderful ending.

Excellent poem! The best I've read in while. Keep up the good work :)

Excelent written... Something that just came to you???
I love that it in some way seperates the mind and soul, though they are always connected...
The end is beautiful...
Excellent work!! 5/5

Ok that's good enough!!!

Wow!!! excellent!!!! please read sum of mine!!!!

My heart is crying for more! will you teach me?

I really like this poem. its shows something that everyone can relate to in life.

Great work! i loved everything about this, i cant pinpoint anything i DIDNT like. 5/5 great work.

It's exactly what I've been trying to get into my poems for a long time, don't stop writing them.

That is pure genius. i really like how it rhymes. ties it all together.

Truely a great poem, you're a great poet

Wonderful writng Sean, simply superlative!!

Wow. this is really good. the imagery is amazing and your details are as well. Keep u the good work.

Impressive. Most impressive.

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To the aura

Loved this poem, fantastic.

Fabulous.. I love it