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by lil loca
I like this so much!!
Beautifully written. I like your style of writing. Its different. This piece explains the emotions you are feeling very well. You can feel your heart break in this write.
That is a sweet poem i really liked that u should keep it u let me know when u have a new one on k.k
Thx for your comments... ill keep you gus updated Ã¼
Wow that's really good better than all my poems
Ur really good u shoud write a book
by Sweet MeMoRiEs
Holy lord this is such a good poem. i really wasnt expecting it to be so good. you could even turn this isnt a song and it would be amazing.. keep it up youve got crazy talent..
Hey i love ur poem it''s really good
keep it up! i know everyone would like to read all ur poems i know i would!
Hey! i really loved this poem. it if full of emotion and ....well what can i say? i love it! keep it up xxx
by Wings Of Flames
Didnt appeal to me too much but i guess all those people thought it was great.
I think your rhythm was a bit off and it didnt seem to have much meaning to you.
But as long as it means something to you thats all that matters
Wow powerful stuf i like it :)
I guess my feelings i should no longer hide
I love you and i want you to stay by my side
I want to hold you in my arms so tight that ill never let go
I want to be with you forever, i hope now you know
[[You started all four lines with I, I, I, I ..maybe try and re-word them.]]
I really liked how you ended it. Thought it was the strongest part of the poem. Great job!
by Megann Lee
Wow that's an emotional poem. Really well written I loved it great job Hun.
by UnToLd TrUtH
Wow this is so good!
by Goran Rahim
It is a perfect poem that many ppl can relate to, you wrote it so nicely and expressed ur words nicely. keep it up.5/5
Wow, this poem was nicely done. the flow seemed to be smooth, and great composure. the ending was kinda rocky, but great job overall.
Awh. I love it. Very well written, the flow was amazing and it kept my attention. It was sad at the same time aswell as sweet, great job though. :]
5/5... Wow.. Im amazed.. Your writing is so refreshing!
Thx for your wonderful comments! ill try improving it now and then... love your comments... i appreciate them!