Comments : Made in Tears

  • 11 years ago

    by lil loca

    I like this so much!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Sammib

    Beautifully written. I like your style of writing. Its different. This piece explains the emotions you are feeling very well. You can feel your heart break in this write.

    Welldone.Godbless
    Sammib

  • 11 years ago

    by Shayla

    That is a sweet poem i really liked that u should keep it u let me know when u have a new one on k.k

  • 11 years ago

    by awww

    Thx for your comments... ill keep you gus updated ü

  • 11 years ago

    by claire

    Wow that's really good better than all my poems

  • 11 years ago

    by thevoice

    Ur really good u shoud write a book

  • 11 years ago

    by Sweet MeMoRiEs

    Beautifully written

  • 11 years ago

    by dee

    Holy lord this is such a good poem. i really wasnt expecting it to be so good. you could even turn this isnt a song and it would be amazing.. keep it up youve got crazy talent..
    dee

  • 11 years ago

    by stacey

    Hey i love ur poem it''s really good
    keep it up! i know everyone would like to read all ur poems i know i would!

  • 11 years ago

    by LostForever

    Hey! i really loved this poem. it if full of emotion and ....well what can i say? i love it! keep it up xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Didnt appeal to me too much but i guess all those people thought it was great.

    I think your rhythm was a bit off and it didnt seem to have much meaning to you.

    But as long as it means something to you thats all that matters
    3/5
    ~Emah

  • 11 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    Wow powerful stuf i like it :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie

    I guess my feelings i should no longer hide
    I love you and i want you to stay by my side

    I want to hold you in my arms so tight that ill never let go
    I want to be with you forever, i hope now you know

    [[You started all four lines with I, I, I, I ..maybe try and re-word them.]]

    I really liked how you ended it. Thought it was the strongest part of the poem. Great job!

    Natalie``

  • 11 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Wow that's an emotional poem. Really well written I loved it great job Hun.

  • 11 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this is so good!

  • 11 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    It is a perfect poem that many ppl can relate to, you wrote it so nicely and expressed ur words nicely. keep it up.5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Driver

    Wow, this poem was nicely done. the flow seemed to be smooth, and great composure. the ending was kinda rocky, but great job overall.
    Driver

  • 11 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Awh. I love it. Very well written, the flow was amazing and it kept my attention. It was sad at the same time aswell as sweet, great job though. :]

  • 11 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    5/5... Wow.. Im amazed.. Your writing is so refreshing!

  • 11 years ago

    by awww

    Thx for your wonderful comments! ill try improving it now and then... love your comments... i appreciate them!

    ~angel~