Wow! great work again! i loved this. it had great detailing...5/5! wow amazing..it really painted a picture.

Wow.. very detailed and emotional.. well written, i love the way you tied the poem in with the title, very effective! great write! 5/5..please read and comment on my poems, thank you .. kirsty palmer xx

This is such a touching poem, congrats. =) 5/5 well written.
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