Well i like it but i know that im not everyone so i dont know if my opinion matters....but ill give it anyways ITS REALLY GOOD! lol i love it! its so cute and believable* too so that makes it even better love it!
Like always and as usual a great poem by a great and a favourite poet of all. this time unfortunatly i don't have anything to say..i mean to criticize ur poem..its a poem with no falls in my opinion..i love how u wrote
To see your beautiful smile,
I will change my own way.
I will break the chain of values,
No matter what the world say.
its one of my favorite lines..espically "chain of values"..thats a big step...by the way is this a true story..lool
like everyone says u seemed to write sad poem but a wonder how u turned to this...its a huge change.
who ever she is she is the most lucky person on this planet to have ur love and respect..to have u and break the chain of value just for her..
keep the great job up..iam looking forward to more..
I am so confused,
what you talking about???
I got lost
why thousand miles?
what beautiful smile?
the reason I am asking you this question I remember you told me your poems are all a true story and you wrote them for one person
but here you are making me confuse.
so if you have to write me please do so cause i want to know.....
but a nice poem I give you that.