Very nice write, with good lines on it that makes the poem flows well..
Ah.... Solace..
5/5
Good work!

This poem had a great rythmn to it , I was just singing it like a song,, great

The imagery you use is very well used. The flow is consistant throughout the whole poem, and I loved the ending stanza - it pulled everything together. Much emotion behind each word, I defintely felt it. Good Job, I loved it.

Omg i loved the way you set this poem up
and once again i loved the word choice
5/5 exilant job =]

This poem was beautiful and very wonderfully written i really enjoyed reading it, you are a fantastic writer great job 5/5

Short but well penned!!
keep it up!!

Nice poem. it sounds as if it could be turned into a song.