Good to see you write again.
Good work.
Keep on writing on what u feel and like..

Nice poem written so nicely

Aww, wonderful write once again. I understand what you are trying to say here, for I have written a poem just like it and it also means a lot to me. The ending was stunning and the most striking realistic part of your piece.

Its a good poem, i prefer the other one though.
love the last stanza.. good job. x

Very good poem..i don;t see many friendship poems..yours was the first in a long time now and i liked this one..it was well written. The flow was a bit off and you had some off rhymes, but the meaning was very strong:)

Awh! Wow! This was really good, hun! Your friend is really lucky to have you! This poem just shows how much you care for them. Excellent write! Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Great job. Very honest emotional poem. Sorry it took so long to get your poems done.

Heyy Good poem!!
^Keep it up^

-Sarah-

Nice thought for a poem. wish people could hear the apologies rattling in our heads bc they never come out the same. Jpoet*

Good poem, im sure many people can relate to that.

Good poem! Keep writing, you get through your poetry really well. Love it!!
~kayla

Beautifully written! 5/5 i hope you write many more like this!

This was just amazing, and well written. Easy to read and good flowing. My favorite stanza was th very first one: "As I lie in my bed
I stare at the ceiling
Thinking of what I said
Thinking of this feeling"

I bet so many people can relate so well to those lines Hun. Keep up the work.

This is really sad and sweet all at the same time. You did such a great job on this. It is filled with so much love and sadness and you expressed them both very well. Great job on this! 5/5

Ahhhh. I love this poem. I can relate too it so well. Heh. It didn't lose my attention and was axtually really nicely written.

Wonderful flow and great expressions!!! keep it up!! =]]

This is beautiful and sad! It almost made me cry. I could feel the deep emtion that you put into it. The flow was good and the wording was wonderful. You have written the type of poem that grabs the reader into it from the beginning until the end. Excellent job! Keep up the wonderful work. 5/5

Letty

Really nice poem.. I love the idea in it. 5/5

Incredible. The only problem I found was:
All I know it lead to a fight
Where ,sadly, there is no winner
Not so sure what it should be on "all i know..."
But the other one should be:
"where, sadly, there is no winner'
Great Job all together though!
5/5

THIS WAS AN INTERESTIN POEM NICE...