Wow. very well written. i can relate.

beth
-xox-

Wow, heart wrenching and touching.

Aww this is a really sad poem, but i can defiantly relate to it so much. you did a wonderful job on this. keep it up! 5/5

~Kristina

Another great poem by you, you are a great writer. 5/5

WoW this is another great poem 5/5

Woah! This poem is so sad! Great but sad. I can relate... I love the way its written! Looking forward to reading more! Keep it up! xx

But now the time is up,
Now only her suicide will be remembered.

[ The only suggestion I have is to maybe take out the "Now" in the last line. Having two of the same words like that kinda throws it off, and it's not really needed there ]]

This was a very sad poem, though. & I hope you're not feeling this way. I really liked at the start how you opened the poem up with a question, that was great. Keep it up!

Natalie``

Excellent! a fan as always!

Short but nicely composed, the flow and transition was good. Keep it up