Very sad poem you have written. i love the worlds you used in it. some of the rhyming isnt all that good, but i can see you tried. great job 5/5

~Kristina

Nice poem :)

This is how i feel when me and my friends fight. but we fight all the time , me and my frien are fighting right now and i have no clue why!!! but your poem is GREAT!

Aww i rrly like ur poem! keep writing and maybe read some of mine;)

Wow speechless, great poem, *shay*

Hi, this was a gret poem u explain how u feel, the truth can be really scary, well thats all great poem bye!

Hit me right here

Thank you so much everyone!

Before I even do an official comment on this poem, I can't help but be annoyed by the title:
*My Worse Fear*

Please change it to

*My Worst Fear*

(now off to read the poem)

(Oh, and a sidenote: Don't put periods at the end of your titles. It makes the title ugly as well)

I feel like I'm going to hit the floor. = I Feel Like I Will Hit the Floor

No body sees whats wrong with me. = No one sees what's wrong with me

And now I can't say on my two feet. = And now I can't STAY on two feet.

Forgive me for I know I failed.= forgive me, for I know I've failed

Friendship doesn't last a life time. = doesn't? Wrong useage of the word...

Friendship ends; Maybe just mine. = friendshipS end

I just hope that they'll come around = I just hope that they'll come around.

I got to give in. = I must give in

Give in my secrets I hold within. = give up the secrets that I hold within

For a minute a cut's pain will hurt. = for ONLY a minute a cut's pain will hurt

This pain stays, and feels like dirt. = But this pain is staying, it's stuck and alert (or something along the line)

Just leave me on the floor. = just leave me *laying* on the floor

just cry and drown in my tears= only cry and drown in tears

Who knew I drug all these years. = Who knew I *drug*?

"*I'll fight my fears on my own.
I'm not going to be all alone."
*That couplet is too much of a contradiction*

Let me be you've done enough. = Let me be, you've done enough.

I can't believe you just shut up. = I can't believe you; just SHUT UP.

Get out my face I can't look at you= Get out my face cause I can't look at you

But now, my worse fear is the truth. = But now, my worst fear is the truth...

The poem was too... sketchy, I didn't particularly enjoy it as much as I know that I should have. I suppose there were too many errors.
Still, you made me think of a poem I wrote a while ago, and the poetry is half on structure, and half on whether or not it comes from the heart. All errors besides, this did come from the heart.

Well written dear,
Hope you're over the loneliness now that you have a boyfriend!
5/5
~Stephen White