Ilinca, what a piece of poetry you have here! The imagery is beautiful and I could feel myself moving along with the sad bride and groom. What a piece, what a piece... Very well done!!!
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Sorry i stoped yesterday i had to go. anyway..wowie great poem. really sucked me in. very very sad yet amazing. the detailing really painted an image in my mind. 5/5

Wow.. i love it.. i had no idea where this poem was going.. its great nice job!

This got a well deserved 2nd place in my contest because i abosolutely loved it. and do u wana know why i loved it? because the idea was amazing, the detailing was even better and it painted a picture in my mind - honestly i could picture the scene vividly. this had amazing flow and the first time i read it it got my heart racing!! no kidding.. the first time i read it, it made me read it faster and faster because i just wanted to know what happened next. it's that sort of poem, and those poems don't come around too often. so great job 5/5!! :D