Another great poem from one of the best poet.........
you had showed a great emotion that captured my attention,
usualy you do perfect job with your words and this poem was one of the best
a 5/5 from me...........
keep it up
I hardly ever comment on the actual poem because i dont know anything about poetry, i just give advice or my thoughts on the content which im going to do again my advice is a quote but an author i respect: "I swear by my life, and my love of it, that i will never live for the sake of another man, nor ask another man to live for mine."
Its really great, I can tell you write straight from your emotions and don't care how personal it is. - like this a lot, check out some of my stuff, I don't have much but there's a lot of personal stuff I have from 2 years ago
Wow. I know this is really a personal poem and is from your heart. I can definitely relate. And I know dealing with stuff can be hard. So I'm glad that you are getting through it and are starting to feel like your old self. Keep writing! It's such a good way of expressing yourself.
This poem kindof confused me in some parts with the wording...its really raw and looks much like a vent that wasnt intended to be anything other than a vent ...not a bad thing:)..its really emotional and touching..good job:):)
It is a good thing to have others...but as Richard likes to say...'your life is your own, rise up and live it' you are all that matters to you in the end, you live for you, you only need you. be strong for yourself....goodluck