God that is a really good poem i know how you feel

I know how you feel, but to me, the poem just wasnt like an actual poem, but a series of sentences... sorry!

I thought it was phenomenal. You hit all the emotions so perfectly, you line up the correct words with the feelings you want to hit. Absolutely great work.

Wow, well written u put alot of emotion great job 5\5 I know where you coming from

You need to take out all the ' in this poem so it flows better. but apart from that minor detail this poem made me smile. well done.

5/5 David