Wow. That was a very beautiful and loving poem to read. This girl you write about is one very lucky lady, lol. Wonderful job writing this piece, keep it up! You have got a lot of talent as a writer. =] 5/5
This is an amazing poem karl. Full of love. I think its so sweet... roses.. one fake... love you when all die... *sigh* cuteeeeee defintally my favorite stanza is the last. Your vocab is simply amazing and your rhyming! wow...
Wow. that was really sweet : ) i loved the flow, it was absolutely flawless. The last stanza was incredible. 12 real, 1 fake.... until the last oen dies etc.... Brilliant.
This is truly a poem to be noticed and probably published. i loved it. 5/5