This was great ,I loved the idea of the one fake rose that never dies, great idea.

That poem was great thanks for the comment on blue eyes it means alot u should read my poem special someone nice job 5/5

That poem was great thanks for the comment on blue eyes it means alot u should read my poem special someone nice job 5/5

The last line was so romantically cliched. I loved it! Throughout the entire poem I could sense that this girl you are talking about is someone amazing, and the last line is what got me. Wonderfully written. 5/5

Woah. I love the last lines "I'll give you 13 roses, 12 real, 1 fake....Then Gaze into your big blue eyes..tell you I'll love you with every breath I take, and untill the last rose dies"....

Awesome line, I laughed at how many times I thought the same way about a certain girl.

5/5 as always, just cause every poem I've read of yours is awesome. Including this one.

-Dan

Hey! Yeah I understand what you're saying I was with someone for like 4 years and we wanted to stay together but I had to move across country and we just broke up...it was hard. But yeah, don't stop looking! kk? buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

Ahhh! Man, I need to write something with this much power to express these exact feelings to my fiancee. You gave me some good ideas man. Wonderfully beautiful read. I honestly do mean that. This has to be the best freaking poem I've read from you so far.,

Ahhh! Man, I need to write something with this much power to express these exact feelings to my fiancee. You gave me some good ideas man. Wonderfully beautiful read. I honestly do mean that. This has to be the best freaking poem I've read from you so far.,

I'm really sorry but this poem didn't speak volumes to me nor did it seem to have much power to it. The words felt like words: Words I might have heard a dozen times in the past. Empty words and the rose thing while beautiful is a saying that has been around for a while now. I'll love you until the last one dies.

It is a nice starter up poem and I do hope you get alot if comments trying to help you improve. It just feels you should put more heart into this. Speak loud. Be heard. Your words qill shine if you let them.

And I'm off to read more poems. Keep writing and never stop : )

I'll give you 13 roses,12 real,1 fake
^^ There's a story about this that I've heard a lot. It's a very sweet and wonderful line but it just seems like you took that idea. Also you have an excessive use of commas that are uneeded. You also want to look at what words to capitolize. The poem overall was very sweet and heartflelt.
Just a few tips no insults or critisism.
God Bless 5/5
Thank you very much for the comment!

~*Tay*~

For anybody who wants to comment and say they know about the one fake rose thing I don't care lol I just made it into a poem thats all its not stealing if its nobody's so just relax lol thanks Karl Wild

Omgosh I totally loved it!! It was soo beautiful Great job!

Lovely lovely lovely. Got a question though: what does the one fake rose symbolize? (did I spell that right lol?)

To keep you happy I'll cross the earth,
I'll do whatever it takes,
To me, your what this entire world is worth,
And I'll make sure your heart never breaks.

Wow man. that hit me. hard. This was fantastic. P.S (I got my girl ;) ) Know exactly how you feel here man, this is just another excellent poem for a really lucky gal.
VByers

Oh my god, you could only imagin how..how..oh i don't know exactly how to say it, but i just can relate so so so well to this poem it makes me cry. No seriously im crying like right now! That peom was, so..realistic to me, i could just picture this guy (you read the one peom for glenn right..?) i could just feel and hear in my mind him readin this to me... it so awesome. If only you knew the whole story. But that would takes days on top of days to tell...lol...*wipes tears from eyes*..you are a true and awesome writer..really i mean it!

Love Alwayz

~shannon~

~la Vie boheme~

Really sweet, really cute and loving.
I love the imagery, the words and everything, you are so talented!

I ABSOLUTLY LOVE IT!! thanks for the comment on mine too

"ll give you 13 roses,12 real,1 fake"

OMG that line totally captivated me. I fell in love with it instantly.
An ingeniuos line. Great job!
10/5

♥
~Stephen White

This has to be one of the sweetest love poems I have read. its great. amazing. you are a talented beautiful writer. im jealous!
great job.
Bree

Awwwww! thats soooo sweet. i loooveee it!!!

ox kisses xo